Sirius and Michelle, Sirius Black in love? Options

[moonshadow]

(Thanks!!!!!!)

"I, um, well I was..." Sirius spluttered, he had never struggled with words in front of a girl before, but then again, no other girl made him feel weak and strong at the same time, or hot and ice cold.
Michelle crossed her arms and tossed her dark brown hair over her shoulder, impatiently.
"Well?"She asked crossly.
Sirius was searching his brain. Why was he down here? He couldn't think properly. Those bright, crystal blue eyes of hers fogged his brain.
She shook her head and sighed.
"I don't have time to deal with you, right now. OK?"
Sirius nodded, not realizing he was doing so; he hadn't heard a word she had just said, he just with it.
"Good." and with that she walked away.
Sirius was confused. Why was she walking away. He shook himself back down to earth.

[riddlemethis326]

Awww... poor Padfoot. Who's your muse with the bright, crystal blue eyes? Perhaps your dearest BFF???

[moonshadow]

Goodness Gracious me, there's no getting past you, is there?

[riddlemethis326]

Not with those allusions to a certain wonderful, amazing, talented, and beautifully-eyed girl... so now are you going to continue this story or what? It's getting good, so keep it up.

[moonshadow]

"Michelle!" he called.
She turned around, really annoyed now.
"What is it Black?" she asked icily.
"I was, um, well wondering if..." he fumbled with several books, while trying to find the right words. The books slipped and fell to the ground. "Um, oh, well..."
Michelle smiled in spite of herself. Sirius Black was not who she had thought he was.He wasn't puffed up that much, and he was kind of cute when he stummbled around with words.
"Do you want to go out with me?" he said, so quickly that it was almost incoherent.
Michelle's smile faded. "what?" she asked, warily.
"Do you want to go to Hogsmeade with me this weekend?" he asked, more slowly.
"I'm seeing someone right now, I mean, he's my boyfriend." she said apoligetically.
"Oh," Sirius felt like he'd been hit by a ton of bricks. "Who is it?" he asked through gritted teeth.
"Um," Michelle said slowly. "Frank Longbottom."

[moonshadow]

okyday a little more

"I'LL KILL HIM!!!" Sirius screamed at James once he had back to his dormitory.
"Who?" James asked.
"FRANK!" Sirius yelled. "THAT IDIOTIC FRANK LONGBOTTOM!!"
James was having fun watching Sirius have girl problems; it was the first time this it had ever happened. "Why?"
Sirius glared at James, he was really ticked off. "He's dating Michelle." he emphasized every silable. Each word dripped with venom.

that's all for now!! i'll probably add more tomorrow.

This post has been edited by moonshadow: Jul 6 2007, 09:38 PM

[Hermione@13]

Hmmm...I wonder if dear old Frank is anything like our Neville? LOL! Okay, I don't think so because they describe him as brave don't they?

[riddlemethis326]

Oh, moonshadow. You do love your Padfoot, don't you?

[moonshadow]

oh, you know I do.


"Alright Sirius here's what you got to do. You have to play it sad."
"Play it sad?" Sirius asked doubtfully.
"Ya," said James, "You know, not meet her eyes when she speaks to you, hang your head where ever you go."
"And that works?"
'Not on Evans but who knows, it might work on my cousin."

[Hermione@13]

Oooooooooooh, play it emo! LOL, this is great because it's sort of like role play, except only one person is doing it all! Keep going...this style keeps us coming back for more and has more room for comments! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif) Hmmm...I wonder what happens in the end....LOL! Michelle is a lucky girl and I could see some jealousy going on from other girls! LOL! But, of course, this is moon's story and I won't say anymore like I know what's going to happen because I truly don't. Hmmm...we all have our own way of writing a series, don't we?

[moonshadow]

Sirius tried to look sad whenever he saw Michelle, but it was utterly impossible. Every time he saw her, he smiled, occasionally she caught his eye and smiled back, but for the most part she didn't even glance at him.

About a week later, Sirius entered the common room and saw Michelle and Frank having a blazing row.
"-And ALWAYS LOOKING AFTER ALICE, LIKE SHE'S YOUR GIRLFRIEND AND NOT ME!!"
"SHE'D BE A BETTER ONE THAN YOU, THAT'S FOR SURE!" Frank retorted.
"OY!" Sirius yelled at him. "DON'T TALK TO HER THAT WAY!"
"Stay out of this, Black." Frank growled menacingly.
"Hey!" James, had followed Sirius thow the portait hole and had now joined the arguement. He pulled out his wand. "If anyone messes with Sirius, they mess with me!"
"And me." Remus said coldly.
"And me." squeked Peter.
"No, not Peter." James said.
Frank slouched off, towards the fireplace, looking as though he would love to shove Sirius's face into it. Michelle, looked at Sirius, tears in her eyes, then ran up the stairs leading to the girls dormitory. Lily stood up from her arm chair, tossed her hair angrily and followed Michelle.
Sirius tried to follow after her, but James grabbed him arm. "Leave it alone, mate." he said, wisely. "She'll want to be alone."

[riddlemethis326]

Lovely. My favorite two lines have to be "No, not Peter" and "looking [towards the fireplace] as though he would love to shove Sirius' face into it." One suggestion though... make your entries longer! I can't get enough.

[loving life]

Wow this is awesome lol your a really good writter haha anywayzzz keep it going!=)..or I'll get board lol

[MrsGinnyPotter]

yes, More more more, and quickly! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wizard2.gif)

[loving life]

lol please keep going! i laugh when peter says" And me" but then James says" No, not peter"!!! ohhhhhhhhhh harsh lol.

[moonshadow]

Well here's some more, hope you enjoy (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

Sirius couldn't help feeling annoyed. Who was James to give him advice on girls? Sirius was the one who had gotten all the girls, not James.
“And what do you know about girls? Nothing!” Sirius spat, he pulled his arm out of James' grip and glared at him.
James' and Remus' expression brought him back to earth; Peter looked terrified, but no more than he usually did. Sirius was shocked with himself. Why had he yelled at his best friends, Remus and James?
He looked at his feet and mumbled a clumsy apology. “Sorry mate, over-reacting.”
James forced a smile, “It's alright.” He rolled his eyes. “Girls.” He said exasperatedly, trying to add a little humor into the tense mood.
“Ya,” Sirius agreed.
James through his arm around him. “Let's go up to the old Dormitory, eh?” Then he added in an undertone, so only Sirius could hear. “Then, grab the cloak and sneak down to the kitchens for something to eat.”
Sirius smiled back at him. “Thanks mate, you sure know how to cheer me up.”
“I'm not as dumb as some people make me out to be, Padfoot, you of all people should know that by now.”

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Down in the kitchens Sirius and James were popular guests. This was no surprise since the two of them ate like starving animals, and to some extent, they were. (The animal part at least). James finished off a chicken leg and set the leftovers onto a plate of dirty dishes.
“Oy! Bleck!” James shouted.
An extremely short and old house elf came bustling up to them.
“Yes, Masters?” he bowed.
“Do you think you can clean this up? We're done for now, but we'll be back soon.” He reassured Bleck, when he saw his stricken face.
“Farewell Masters.”
“Goodbye Sirs.”
“Come back soon.”
The house elfs goodbyes were still ringing in their ears when they returned to their dormitory.
Sirius groaned as he got into bed and buried his face in his pillow.
“What's wrong mate?” James asked. “Got a stomach ache from eating too much chicken? James laughed, remembering how much Sirius had eaten down at the kitchens.
“It's not that.” Sirius' voice was slightly muffled by the pillow blocking his mouth. “I just don't want to see Michelle tomorrow.”
“You don't like her anymore?” James guessed.
“No,” Sirius sighed. “I do, and that's the problem, I like her and she knows it and she doesn't like me.”
“Well I guess you like me now, mate, stuck liking a girl who would rather die than go out with you.” James laughed bitterly.
“Ya, I guess.” Sirius muttered, and with that he turned onto his side and fell into a fretful sleep.

What you guys think? Long enough for you, riddle?

This post has been edited by moonshadow: Sep 9 2007, 10:50 PM

[loving life]

good good good!;]

[MrsGinnyPotter]

Really good (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wizard2.gif)

[moonshadow]

thanks

[one_too_many_bro...]

one word - awesome


cant get over the "no, not peter." keep it going (h5)