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Sep 21 2006, 08:15 PM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
Set in the 6th year so forget everything in the 6th book okay well, harry ron and hermione all still in as are the other characters but now a new group of students are coming from other magic schools to hogwarts. All with invites and new styles and flaws. POV's will variate
"who are all the new people?" Harry asked his two mates, "dunno, but they're too old to be first years," said Ron, "Don't you to re-" started hermione but was cut off as a girl with brown hair dancing across her shoulders walked up to them, harry didn't regognise her at all, she must have been one of the new students. "G'day!" said the girl with a strong Australian accent, "the names Sierra, who are you?" she asked confidently. "Oh um... Hi, well I'm Hermione," said hermione stunned at the pretty girls confidence, ron however seemed completey lost for words. "Hermione Granger, Sirra's POV: "I'm Harry," Said a boy with messy black hair, "He's not just harry," a boy with red hair butted in "he's Harry Potter." he said as if it should have impressed me, "Oh hi, i don't be concered if I'm not blushing and swooning I just don't find a name that impressive it's the soul that intrgues me." I said matter-o-factly, "With me moral fibre scores best," i turned on my heel and went to introduce my self to a group standing of the other side of the platform, "G'day," i said cheerfully. "What do you want?" drawled a boy with white blonde hair. I was quite annoyed by they boys rudness, "My name's Sierra I'm one of the new 6th years, who are you?" she asked unimpressed by the boys wandering eyes, up her tall body. "Draco Malfoy, and this is Crabbe & Goyle," stated Draco, "What about me draco, aren't you going to introduce meeeee..." whinded a girl from in the corner she reminded me of a impatient Cokatoo nice at first but whiny little things when you get used to them they never stop cawing. "Oh right-" said Draco, "Um... what did you say your name was again? well anyway this would be Pansy." "Nice to know," I said unimpressed, "So who do i want to know around here?" I asked, "The group over there seemed pretty nice," I said pointing over to harry and his friends. "Ha! don't make me laugh weasle, mudblo-" started Draco, Draco's POV: The girl with amazing quick reflexs did a quick movment with her hand and I couldn't talk, she'd done a spell with out a wand something i'd never seen before. "You listen to me matey, i don't ever want to here those words come out of your mouth again, understood?" and with another flick of her wrist i could speak again, "Perfectly. so who are you anyway?" I asked "Why must i be surronded by idiots, if you'd draw your eyes of me you might learn something the names Sierra, don't forget it. cause it'll always be better than you DRACO." Said the girl sardonically, and with that she turned on her heel and walked over to another group of guys,i didn't miss them drooling over her it wasn't excatly hard to see, among those guys a tall mediterraean looking face was above the group this guy however had collected himself and didnot look like a babboon with a saliva contorol problem and as the guys seperated to let her into my group i noticed who that person was my cousin, Nick. Nicks POV: A girl dessed little cargo mini shorts & a tanktop walked up to me and my mates, as if she'd known us for years. I wish this girl was beautiful who was she? "Hey," Said the girl, "The names Sierra, i'm a new 6th year from Australia. what's your name?" I noticed the question was directed at me, "Oh um... I'm Nick, another transfer student. Sup?" the girl looked somewhat shocked at the question. "Sorry but um... sup? i don't follow?" Said the girl, blushing geez she even looked hot when she was blushing. "Sup? as in what's up?" i said "Oh right, um... just trying to meet people see who i'm meant to be hanging out around, sorting out the dingoes from the foxes." "Sorry?" I said not meaning to be rude, "I don't really understand?" the girl just tossed hair and laughed a little. "I don't understand your gibberish and you don't understand mine, sweet and sour the nice from the naughty the good and the bad you pick just sussing people out." said Sierra with a laugh. A sharp whistle blew as a red steam train pulled up to the platform. "Oh well, nice meeting you Nick, see you again soon i hope." she said with a smile and left to board the train. "As do i..." thought nick. Sierra's POV: so far i'd been offered a seat in every compartment, but still i hadn't sat down. Finally i saw a large cabin at the end with 8 people in it, i pulled open the door slowly and had to quickly dodge, a curse. "Or should i curse your mudblood friend." said a drawling voice i new that vioce draco malfoy stupid git. "Expelliramus," I cried, a black wand flew toward my outreched palm and i caught it easily, " I said i never wanted to hear that word come out of your mouth," I said stepping into the compatment, "So now i've stopped you hexing people what about punishment..." I said, "lets see Furnunculus!" i said Boils appeared all over dracos body, "Yeah that'll do it, off you go cya!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I walked into the great hall quite awear of all the people around me, so i would have to be sorted again, i hope i'm ingryffindor and from what that hat said i should be... but you never know. Nick's POV: I'm a disgrace to my family none of the the Malfoy's willl ever want to talk me again. I'm not in slytherin (thank you lord,) not only that but I'm in Gryffindor, yessss. I've already made some friends, a girl who seems rather intelligent, Hermione Granger, a red-head called Ron, the amazing Harry Potter & one little picture of innocence well mabye not innocent but she's absolutely gorgeous her names Sierra. "Sierra, you haven't toched anything but that potato and your pumpkin juice." Said Hermione with a concerned look on her face. I looked at Sierras plate ansurley half a potato with nothing on it was all that sat there. "Your not one of those crazy girls who don't eat to stay thin are you?" I asked quickly. "What? no, no. nothing like that, I'm a vegetarian." Said Sierra lifting her head, "I eat like a pig." She stuffed the entire half of potato inher mouth and piled some vigies on her plate. "Your not going to eat all that are you?" asked Ron. "Um... yeah and dessert, but a quidditch captains gotta keep up her strength." Lughed Sierra with a mouth full of food. Harry sent a mouthful of pupkin juice flying across the table and over plates of food. "WHAT?!" said harry, grabbing a shiny badge that was sitting on his chest that he had also recived in the hand out of timetables. I looked in closer as did Sierra. "What?!" Screamed sierra, "Why do you have that badge on?!" I noticed that gryffindor were not the only house table with that kind of argument. Sierra stood up, "Well come on we are talking to dumbledore about this!" |
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Sep 23 2006, 03:29 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
well i don't want to waste my time writing if i'm no good so please let me know
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Sep 23 2006, 11:13 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 985 Joined: 24-September 05 From: usa Member No.: 3,766 |
wow, that was good. I like it alot. Keep writing!
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Sep 23 2006, 10:07 PM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
Harry's POV:
Sierra walked up to the staff table dragging me by the ear, "Get off," I said, she let go nearly sending me sprwling into the ground. as i stood up noticed people from every house standing and walking up to the table, with a predicement much like our own. "WHATS THIS?!" Yelled Sierra in Dumbeldores face, "Two quidditch captains i think not!" "Calm down, children. I've done this as so no new student will lose a role he or she had at there old school." Said Dumbeldore calmly, "You'll find it is acctually quite a relief." "Well it was kinda stressfull last year," Said Sierra calming down, "Yeah, It was." said a familiar voice, "Hey, Cho." I said. "Oh Hi Harry," Said Cho blushing "Well um... nice seeing you bye." "Oh yeah, bye." I said it was funny not a single day dream of going out with Cho maybe I truly had given up on her. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hermione's POV: "Great just great were are they? I can't believe this my first day and i can't even find my robes." Muttered Sierra. "Take a chill pill, Sierra. Anyway Nick has them." Said hermione with a laugh. "What!?" Yelled Sierra. "Oi!" She stormed down the stairs with just a tanktop and boxers on, "Give me back my robes mr." I could here her yelling from downstairs. "Whoa, back up crocodile hunter, you've got the wrong trunk that would be my stuff in one of them cause this isn't mine." I looked down from the top of the stairs to see Nick holding up a bra high enough for everyone to see. "Give that back!" Yelled Sierra, she pushed him backwards and siezed the opportunity while he still had not regained his balance and grabbed her bra. then stormed up the stairs to the boys dormitory then come down again dragging a large trunk behind her she dropped it in the middle of the common room and drew something that looked like a dagger sheath. "This better not be damaged." she said from the sheath she pulled a large knife. "Your lucky cause if this was damaged it might just cause you an injury if it was." She re-seathed the knife and the dragged her sauitcase up the stairs and into the dormitory. "Urgh I'll kill him crocidile hunter i'll absolutely kill him he'll never play quidditch at hogwarts no matter if he's skilled or not." Mutter Sierra as she struggled into her robes. "You ready hermione?" she asked. she grabbed her books she walked out of the dormitory. "Wait!" I screamed down the stairs. "You forgot your wand!" I said looking for one in her stuff. She actually had the nerve to laugh, "I don't use a wand," She moved her hand and the chest of drawers slammed shut. "You don't need a wond to do magic?" I asked i must have heard wrong. "No, no wands for me." and with that she walked down to her classes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ron's POV: |
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Sep 24 2006, 08:05 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 985 Joined: 24-September 05 From: usa Member No.: 3,766 |
wow, this is good! I liked the part with the bra...ha ha!
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Sep 24 2006, 06:16 PM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
it made me laugh to
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Sep 24 2006, 07:00 PM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
well i'll keep going.
Harry's POV: Finally a class he'd been looking forward too Defence Against The Dark Arts ever since I knew Lupin was teaching us again. "Good Morning Class, welcome to then new students. now as i don't know what you all know i'll be doing a test." Said Lupin cheerfully. "Don't worry hermione its not graded and it a practical test." He said with a laugh. Hermione looked confronted but i was trying not to laugh so i couldn't tell her to calm down. "Ok everyone as this is a double we'll start inside going around hogwarts then finish up outside with an obstacle course." Said Lupin standing and exiting the classroom. There was a loud scraping of chairs and a babble of exciting chatter broke out as they left the room. We stopped infront of an empty classroom, the same classroom we'd battle a boggart in, in our third year. Lupin began talking in a loud clear voice. "Now my earlier students will recognise this room from their third year, we shall again battle a-" "Boggart." I muttered. "What?" Said Sierra from behind the group. "A Boggart," said hermione "You know a shapeshifter." "I'm not dumb i know what they are but I'm not really scared of anything." she said. "Well um... what was your name?" Asked Lupin "Sierra, sir." "Well yes we'll send you up first." "Yes, sir." Sierra stood in the centre of the room and Lupin magically opened a cabinet, the boggart was not sticking with one thing it was constantly changing going through things that everyperson should fear and Sierra looked un-nerved. "borrrrring. Riddikulus." Muttered Sierra and the Boggart exploded. "Sorry to spoil your fun folks," Said Sierra there were many dissapointed faces around. "Wow..." Lupin said from the middle of the group "Sierra is either very skilled at blocking her mind or not scared of anything. This is an amazing example of the boggarts biggest fault, it does a lot of guesswork. When it guesses wrong the person is no longer fearfull because they see it for what it truly is." Sierra blushed. Hermione's POV: She comes and is the smartest prettiest most popular girl in our year maybe even in the school. I'm so jealous you shoulve seen how she handled the boogart and the obstaclee course she's amazing she even beat HARRY in a duel and she didn't even find it hard. she addmitted she had an advantage of not needing a wand but still she beat Harry. All the guys drool over her even the one I secretly love. "I'm really tired it's been a really long week." Yawned Sierra "There's a hogsmade visit tomorrow so we'll all meet here at 7am go down have breakfast and leave is that cool?" she asked. "Yeah," aid Harry and Ron in unison. "Well night," She said and she walked up two bed. I laughed straight away trying too fit in "What a loser, I mean honestly," "What?" asked Harry. "I really like her she's actually really nice Hermione." Said Ron in Sierra's defence. "Yeah, i never thought you'd say that Hermione. Your just jealous cause she's smarter than you and everyone likes her more than you." Said Harry, "I'm going to bed." He stood. "Yeah me too." Said Ron. |
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Oct 1 2006, 03:30 PM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 985 Joined: 24-September 05 From: usa Member No.: 3,766 |
this is really good! I've probably said that before, but hey, it's the truth
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Oct 3 2006, 02:37 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
thanks your the only one responding but i'll keep on writing just for you
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Oct 4 2006, 06:08 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
Sierra:
"Hmmm... What to wear what to wear?" I muttered under my breath studying my drws with a awkward glance. "What about this?" Asked hermione reaching across and pulling out a frilly baby doll dress. I burst out laughing. "Your not serious are you?" I noticed her hurt expression "Oh, you were sirious. well i only were that with jeans when my grandmothers around cause she gave it to me." I said ending with a giggle. "Oh, um.. well bye." Said hermione and she walked out her eyes filling with tears. "Oops..." I whispered. I rumaged through my drawers and found my skinny legs and my cargee green shirt, I slowly pulled on my black leather knee-high boots and studied my reflection in the mirror. "Oh My God!" Scream Lavender Brown from her bed where she too was getting ready, "You look hot as Sierra!" "Thanks," I said Blushing and with that I left for the common room right on 7. I froze halfway dpwn the stairs, because in the corner of the room i saw Hermione seemingly chatting up nick, "hornya" I whispered immediately i could hear Hermione and Nicks voices as if i was standing right there. "So any way," Said hermione tossing her hair. "I was wondering if you wanted to come to hogsmede wit-" I walked up quickly and interupted. "Nick i was wondering if i could have a word," I looked at Sierra shooting me a greasy that was full of a hatred like she knew what i was doing, "Privately." I added quickly. "Sure," Said nick taking my hand and pulling me away from everyone. "I was wondering if you where going to the winter fancy dress ball?" It was a stupid question but i couldn't let hermione ask him she had one motive and that was to hurt me and i don't know why she thought Nick cause I love another. "Of course i am Sierra it's compulsory." He said with a confused experession. "Well cool don't forget a mask cause it is a masked ball." I said blushing slightly. "Alright guys," I said loudly so the group could here "Let's go!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I've never had butter beer before i really like it." i said polishing off my bottle. "Sierra, Hermione, I had an idea it's kind of corny though," Said ginny putting down her own bottle. "Well because the winter ball is coming i thought you two & me could go get our costumes and then the guys could get theres seperatley to keep the mystery of the whole masked ball thing alive." "I think it's a great idea ginny." Said Harry, "Yeah me too." I added. it turned out everyone agreed. so upon ron finishing his butter beer, We split up into guys and girls and went our seperate ways. "We should design our costumes first." Said hermione, it was a good idea so i nodded in agreement. "There's a cafe, that i got told about we can design them there. Madam Pudingfoots?" Suggested Ginny. "Sounds cool." I said. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I was the only one who hadn't designed an outfit for the ball, Ginny was going as a mermaid and hermione as a Genie yet i still didn't know what i should go as. "I thought a female dragon rider? or a fairy princess?" I said embarresed. "I bet no one will turn up as a dragon rider," Said Ginny "2 people have already said that that's what they're doing." Said Hermione. "Well they'll just have some competition won't they." I said with a smirk, hermione looked at me with what i was sure was hatred but then when i looked again it had vanished. "are you alright Hermione?" I asked. "Just leave me alone!" And with that she stood up slammed 9 sckels on the table and stormed out the door the bell ringing behind her. Ginny: "What's her problem?" Sierra asked me. "Your her problem." I said not really wanting to have to discuss it. "Whoa, what? what did i do?" Sierra asked she looked geuinely confused. "If you hadn't turned up, Sierra, Hermione would still be the smartest girl in your year level & people would've noticed that she'd become a lot prettier over the summer." I said with a sigh "She's being selfish you can't help it and it's not like your throwing yourself at ro-" I stopped and bit my tounge. "RON?! what on earth?" Sierra had noticed urgh! |
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Oct 8 2006, 03:32 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
WELL DO I KEEP ON WRITING
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Oct 8 2006, 07:36 AM
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Hugest HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 4,709 Joined: 21-February 04 From: London, please?!? Member No.: 4 |
Please do not use caps lock on, since it means you're shouting! Thanks...
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Oct 14 2006, 07:07 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
Um... i didn't mean it but i kept callin Sierra Aryra in this post so you'll have to deal i'm sorry
[i]Hermiones POV: I sprinted back towards the chapel, bags swinging from my arms she dodged a muddy puddle careful not to mess up my costume, then suddenly slammed on the brakes to aiviod running into. "Hermione," Said Sierra not even flinching when I nearly ran her over, i studied the girl she looked more like an elf than i'd ever realised. So not only was she as beautiful as a Veela she was as stunning as an elf not to mention powerful. She stood with so much grace, it was almost swan like but then she still looked as alert as a lion. "I said leave me ALONE!" I yelled pushing past her, aryra showing another elvish trate sprinted after me with super-human strength,and jumped on me. She felt heavier than she should of i turned to see a lioness pinning me to the ground [i]what thats not aryra, she was behind the silvery formation. "Stop," she said patting the lioness softly "ron? this is all about ron! I don't even like Ron! Hermione, be sensible i'm not chasing after what you already wanted!" And with that she sprinted back into the forest as she removed her hand from my wrist i noticed something some of her make-had smudged revealing a saphirre-blue patch on her forward. she wouldn't already have make-up for the ball on would she? only the dragon-riders had those marks the colour of their dragons scales. **************************************************************************************** Aryra's POV: I sat staring at my reflection on the mirror i muttered and incantation and i saw my dragon sitting the gnawing at a deer carcus devouring her dinner typical, thats all you ever do isint it eat oceanea? I asked. We never fly anymore i just entertain myslef. little one She said sulking I wish we could, we just might be able to tonight. I felt Oceanea's mid open more in a state of excitment. this better not be a foolish, idea Aryra. She said skepticaly The ball, i'm going as myself a dragon rider, i could ride you in. Dumbledore said it would be fine and so did the elves, because then people would finally know the eggs were hatching again We must go then! Oceanea said excitedly. I'll get ready and then i'll meet you in 1 hour on the outskirts of the forest I felt Oceanea's concious rip away and i stood to get myself ready. I plated into my battle armour sheathed Mirithim, by my side. Fixed my hair, and looked in the mirror. I looked exactly the same as i had at the elvish feast of guaragdred, except my feartures were more elvish than ever. I grabbed a tissue and wiped away the make-up covering my elenti-signarue, and let the blue patch shine brightly. I ran down the stairs and through the common room underneath a cloak as everyone was doing so no one knew who i was, then i sprinted down to the edge of the forest. Little one! cried Oceanea tossing her head in joy. shall we ride? I asked noticing the loud voices coming from the transformed quidditch pitch. We shall. I slid th saddle onto Oceanea's back and then mounted her. I felt her powerful wings push underneath me and we were in the air. Nicks POV: "Okay everyone," Dumbeldore said his gaze wandered to the sky, "Please move to the edges of the pitch." Everyone quickly did as he said. I looked around and noticed what people had come as, The was a Genie, standing next to a mermaid, then Ron was further down next to harry, who was pulling away from a very flirty fairyand then me. "Why are we all like this?" I asked to no one in particular my question was answered almost immediatley as out of the sky dived a bright blue dragon, landing gracefully in the center of the pitch. A girl jumped down the hugged her dragon aroung the neck. "is that real!" screamed a pixie from across the outher side of the pitch. "Everyone, one of our students is a dragon rider as you have already realised." Dumbeldore said, "I've known this since they enroled and it's up to them to reavel any further information about themselves so do not badger them. Now mingle everyone for you most likly have not spoken to many." With a flick of his wand the stadium walls vanished reaveling room for mst likly the entire magical community. The rider climbed aboard her dragon and moved out into the area. I walked towards them but i could no longer see the rider, just people around the dragon. I spotted the rider near a table smashing the lid off a butter beer against the edge of the table. "Hi," I said walking up to them. "Helentri," She said i recognised the voice but couldn't identify the person. "Sorry," she muttered "Hello," "That's fine, how are you?" I asked, "Fine, and you mate?" She said, "Um... good, interested and amazed." I said, she nodded understanding. My eyes fell on her forehead where a blue patch matching dragons scales was. "My elenti-signarue," She said answering my question "It is a mark all rider recieve when the touch the dragon hatchling. I was branded with this when i forst touched Oceanea." She motioned to her dragon. Then she walked away. Aryra's POV: Who is that knight? he's familiar yet i can not place him. I asked Oceanea, looking at my sword. [/i]Touch his mind then you'll know. She said But then i ruin the fun, of not knowing them I said, I stood to find the knight infront of me, and suddenly before i knew what i was even doing, I wrapped my arms around his neck and kissed him. Nick's POV: Here i am standing i a corridor kissing a dragon rider What am i doing kiss her man keep going![b][/b] my head was screaming |
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Oct 14 2006, 10:49 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 985 Joined: 24-September 05 From: usa Member No.: 3,766 |
wow, this is getting better and better!
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Oct 14 2006, 05:58 PM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
Sierra's POV:
I felt the knights had moved toward my mask no, i can't because i don't want people to know if i'm the rider I pulled back "Sorry, but my dragon has a curfew and i've passed it." It was a lame excuse but i had to get away. I walked back outside and moved towards Oceanea, but was blocked by a large group of people surronding my dragon. "Excuse me." I said no one moved, "Excuse Me!!!" I yelled still no one move, "Get out of the way!!!" I screamed two people looked back but that was all the reaction i got. Oceanea make them move use your tail or something. Oceanea swung her face around and it was directly facing Pansy Parkson. "Oh look, she wants a new rider me." She said and started to climb onto Oceanea. I was furious who did she think she was, "GET OFF MY DRAGON!!! Thrysta!" A ball of air hurtled toward pansy knocking her off balance Oceanea reared and Pasy fell. "You never go near my dragon again! understood?" I yelled over her bent form "Perfectly." She muttered. I climbed into the saddle, and waved goodbye too the surronding people. What happened, little one? Oceanea asked being nosy. We kissed, i really don't want to talk about it. I sheilded the part of my mind that remembered the kiss from Oceanea's mind. *********************************************************************************************************** To mystery knight, I enjoyed our meeting at the ball, but i'm dying to know who you are. I'll sit at the gryfindor table at breakfast, with a yellow rose please come and find me. Take this braclet to show me that it's you, do not damage it though for it's quite valuable. love dragon rider Sierra attched the letter to Wyrda the white raven given to her by the queen of the elves and threw her out the window watching her take flight into the morning sunrise |
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Oct 18 2006, 09:27 PM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 985 Joined: 24-September 05 From: usa Member No.: 3,766 |
this is cool. this keeps getting better!
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Oct 19 2006, 03:24 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
Nicks POV:
A White raven sat at the window to the boys dormitories tapping the glass with it's beak, i got out of bed and opened the window. The raven stuck out it's leg and i took of the letter and offered it an owl treat, "One eats, only there food of thought or phyisically speaking don't fall to the trap of the unknown." I shrieked, and flew off owl treat still in my hand. I quickly unwrapped the letter. To mystery knight, I enjoyed our meeting at the ball, but i'm dying to know who you are. I'll sit at the gryfindor table at breakfast, with a yellow rose please come and find me. Take this braclet to show me that it's you, do not damage it though for it's quite valuable. love dragon rider I re read the letter then slipped the braclet onto my bedside and drifted off to sleep. Sierra's POV: 'Come on, what kind of knight are you?' I thought to myself it had been half an hour and no sight of the knight. Only a few eaters remained in the great hall most chatting excitedly. "Yellow rose," I heard a voice mutter from the door to the great hall, i quickly picked up the rose and twirled it in my fingers not daring to tur around. "Dragon Rider?" Asked a vioce behind me i turned around, "Sierra?" Said nick shocked "Nick!" I cried "don't get my hopes up like that i'm waiting for someone." "I am your someone," He said holding out the bracelet, he leaned down a quickly kissed me the same kiss i recieved at the ball i heard students walking into the hall, stop talking. 'What am i doing, this is my friend not a knight.' I wrenched out of his grasp and punched him in the face. "Who do you think you are i'm waiting for a knight not you!" I said, "Someone has my braclet, and it can't be you" i yelled rubbing away the make-up covering my shining forehead. I ran out of the hall not even turning back |
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Oct 19 2006, 05:45 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 985 Joined: 24-September 05 From: usa Member No.: 3,766 |
(IMG:style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif) That's really all I have to say,. Keep up the good work.
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Oct 20 2006, 02:43 AM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 597 Joined: 12-August 06 From: Ellesmera Member No.: 5,282 |
thanks your the only one reading well at least replying but i'll keep writing for you. sorry about any typos
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Oct 20 2006, 11:10 PM
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Big HP Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 985 Joined: 24-September 05 From: usa Member No.: 3,766 |
eh, typos happen. i learned to deal with them. this is really good
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