Apr 6 2007, 01:25 PM
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It was a extremely cold weekend at Hogwarts, and most everyone had gone done to Hogsmeade to do some last minute Christmas shopping. Most everyone, three fifteen year-old boys stood in the bitter Quidditch watching the Gryffindor Quidditch team tryouts. So far most everyone who had tried to play had failed, but there were still about ten people left.
"Michelle...Potter!" called a boy with untidy black hair. He was the whole reason the three boys, Sirius Black, Remus Lupun, and Peter Petigrew, were there. He was James Potter, captian and seeker of the Gryffindor Quidditch Team. "Michelle Potter?" Siruis said in confusion, "I didn't know James had a sister." "She's not his sister; she's his cousin," Remus relplied, exasperated, "You should know that by now, Sirius, she's in our house and she's Lily's best friend." "Oh, really?" Sirius asked disbelieving. "Yes," Reamus replied, patiently. "Come off it Moony. How could a girl that good-looking be related to Prongs?" Sirius said, smirking, "and besides," he continued, "I'd have noticed her if she was in our house." "You were to busy spending every minute of the day with Rebecca, to even notice any other girls," replied Remus cooley. "Yah," said Sirius indignantly, "Well, then, how come Prongs never mentioned her at all?" "Because, she has the same opinion about him as Lily does," Remus said, "Looks like they're done." And indeed all players had finished with there tryouts. James came stumping towards them looking cold, tired, and grumpy. They didn't speak as the went back up to the castle. Sirius was still thinking about Michelle Potter. Yet, when they sat down to eat Sirius said, "How come you never told us you had a cousin, Prongs?" James, who had been eating with gusto due to the long, cold Quidditch tryouts, looked up in surpise, "You know she's my cousin?" he asked. "Course we know Michelle's your cousin, and how come you never told us?" Sirius repeated, looking annoyed. "Well, because she likes me as much as Evans does," James said quietly. "Why?" inquired Sirius. "Because she listens to Evans, I suppose." replied James gloomily. "Why are you so interested in my cousin, anywise, Padfoot, " he said suddenly. "No reason," Sirius said casually. "He thinks she's really good-looking," said Remus, matter of factly. "Shut up, Moony," Sirius muttered, as James started to girn. "So, you like my cousin do you," James said, smirking, "What happened to you and Rebecca? I thought you two were always going to be together." "Well," said Sirius looking at his plate, "it turns out she fancies a Ravenclaw, think his name is Andrew." "Oh, sorry mate," James said trying to striaghten his face, but finding it difficult. This post has been edited by moonshadow: Apr 6 2007, 04:54 PM |
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Apr 6 2007, 06:40 PM
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Greatest HP Fan That Ever Lived ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Admin Posts: 9,278 Joined: 21-February 04 Member No.: 2 |
Hermione, before you get on someone be careful, Nina had to correct one of your posts for incorrect spelling.
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moonshadow Sirius and Michelle Apr 6 2007, 01:25 PM
riddlemethis326 Nice one, Nanners moonshadow. Luckily I made you ... Apr 6 2007, 04:54 PM
Hermione@12 Hmmm... okay, I'll be the critic of this one. ... Apr 6 2007, 05:02 PM
moonshadow Thanks, i guess i'll do more later, dont want ... Apr 6 2007, 05:11 PM
baty4potter Let's not nit pic at grammar. As long as some... Apr 6 2007, 06:31 PM
Hermione@12 I told you I'm the critic! Just kidding... Apr 6 2007, 06:33 PM
Nina79 Hermione@12, I had to edit one of the words you di... Apr 6 2007, 06:40 PM
moonshadow Hmmm, i want to write more, but i'm kinda at a... Apr 6 2007, 06:43 PM
baty4potter Take your time, plan your strategy then post it. Apr 6 2007, 06:45 PM
Hermione@12 Sorry, guys! I sometimes forget that the words... Apr 6 2007, 06:47 PM
moonshadow Ok thanks guys, here's a little section:
Sudd... Apr 17 2007, 09:56 PM
riddlemethis326 Keep it coming! You can do it! Apr 18 2007, 06:59 PM
moonshadow Here goes:
"So..." Moony paused, castin... Apr 26 2007, 09:14 PM
moonshadow No one reads my story, *snif* but I'll cary on... May 3 2007, 09:05 PM
baty4potter You're doing fine, people aren't going to ... May 4 2007, 05:47 AM
moonshadow Thanks!!! May 4 2007, 06:35 AM
riddlemethis326 QUOTENo one reads my story, *snif* but I'll ca... May 4 2007, 05:09 PM
moonshadow (Sorry for not posting in a while )
Sirius walk... Jun 13 2007, 07:39 PM
Nina79 It's great, keep it coming! Jun 14 2007, 05:01 PM
moonshadow (Thanks!!!!!!)
"I, u... Jun 15 2007, 09:48 PM
riddlemethis326 Awww... poor Padfoot. Who's your muse with the... Jun 15 2007, 09:51 PM
moonshadow Goodness Gracious me, there's no getting past ... Jun 15 2007, 10:00 PM
riddlemethis326 Not with those allusions to a certain wonderful, a... Jun 15 2007, 10:05 PM
moonshadow "Michelle!" he called.
She turned a... Jul 5 2007, 10:32 AM
moonshadow okyday a little more
"I'LL KILL HIM... Jul 6 2007, 07:47 PM
Hermione@12 Hmmm...I wonder if dear old Frank is anything like... Jul 6 2007, 08:59 PM
riddlemethis326 Oh, moonshadow. You do love your Padfoot, don... Jul 6 2007, 10:40 PM
moonshadow oh, you know I do.
"Alright Sirius here... Jul 16 2007, 11:20 AM
Hermione@12 Oooooooooooh, play it emo! LOL, this is great ... Jul 16 2007, 07:43 PM
moonshadow Sirius tried to look sad whenever he saw Michelle,... Aug 7 2007, 11:31 AM
riddlemethis326 Lovely. My favorite two lines have to be "No,... Aug 10 2007, 08:34 AM
loving life Wow this is awesome lol your a really good writter... Aug 12 2007, 01:13 AM
MrsGinnyPotter yes, More more more, and quickly! Sep 8 2007, 12:38 PM
loving life lol please keep going! i laugh when peter says... Sep 8 2007, 07:14 PM
moonshadow Well here's some more, hope you enjoy
Siriu... Sep 9 2007, 10:46 PM
loving life good good good!;] Sep 10 2007, 01:26 AM
MrsGinnyPotter Really good Sep 10 2007, 04:02 PM
moonshadow thanks Sep 15 2007, 03:19 PM
one_too_many_broken_hearts one word - awesome
cant get over the "no, n... Sep 15 2007, 06:52 PM
moonshadow Thanks!!
Sirius awoke the next day, tired... Sep 26 2007, 10:14 PM
loving life wicked! but i think you should add more ... Sep 29 2007, 03:56 AM
moonshadow thanks, this part has a lot of wormtail, hopefully... Sep 29 2007, 08:51 PM
moonshadow urg i'm having a writers block and i can't... Oct 5 2007, 09:51 PM
loving life haha. just think of what you would do in a situati... Oct 5 2007, 10:55 PM
Shannon o wow...its great! i love it! Nov 6 2007, 01:44 PM
moonshadow The next morning Sirius awoke tired and extremely ... Nov 27 2007, 04:09 PM
hpfannx3 WOW. that is all i have to say. This is so good. K... Mar 10 2008, 05:33 PM![]() ![]() |
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